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zander
Registered: May 2007
Location: UK
Posts: 117
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Fri May 11, 2007 11:15
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Rating: 7.00
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You got good detail in the skin and hair and it's a good b+w conversion. The seperation from the background is good and it's oof enough to be not too distractiong. I'd be tempted to crop off the left side to exclude the bright area top left and crop off the bottom to where his shoulder (?) meets his chin.
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Sometimes you've got to do your own thing...
...and sometimes you've got to follow the crowd.
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Dayo
Registered: April 2007
Location: Bahrain
Posts: 447
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Thanks. Will have a look see.
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Ransom
Registered: May 2007
Location: Just West of the Pond in SC
Posts: 109
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Wed May 16, 2007 02:22
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Rating: 7.00
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I've heard that the Nikon kit 18-200 is the best of the bunch. I think you have done exceptionally well with it here. Nice and sharp where needed. The diagonals work really well within the composition and the B/W conversion is an excellent job. Perhaps a bit of a crop from the left(just right of the bright reflections) might be more pleasing. Sometimes unconventional ratios tend to work quite well depending on the shot itself.
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Cheers! Robert..
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