Registered: May 2007 Location: Missouri, USA Posts: 61 users gallery
An old mill in south central Missouri
Date: Wed May 23, 2007 Views: 4825
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Dayo
Registered: April 2007 Location: Bahrain Posts: 447
Wed May 23, 2007 17:23
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Well done on this.
You have used the elements in the frame to compose the images very well. The water forms a diagonal and the tree trunk helps frame the shot. I also like how it is possible to see some detail in the lower interior on the mill building.
You might want to see how cropping so that the top left doesn't show the other end of the trunk will look. This will also reduce the amount of sky top right.
Warm the shot up a touch might also improve the "feel".
Ransom
Registered: May 2007 Location: Just West of the Pond in SC Posts: 109
Wed May 23, 2007 23:20
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I'll echo Dayos comments for the most part, but I don't think any cropping would help. I do think that perhaps a bit more exposure or maybe upping Brightness/Saturation might bring out the shadows and make it 'Pop' a bit more. Just a thought tho.. Great shot!
